Plazas de Aragon # 35
Mexico City
Tel: 57834786
April 4, 2008
Dear trustees:
In our opinion, that demands careful thought because this would finish with many uses, it would leave people without income and very many people without school.
Therefore this would have many disastrous consequences. I suggest the trustees would have to raise other alternatives before thinking about selling the company.
Sincerely
Jessica Mijangos
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Please check page 17 of the Style Guide for help in writing letters and follow the pattern.
Dears all - Dear Trustees:
that is necessary to think well - that demands careful thought
this would finish with many uses, - this would have many disastrous consequences. It...
Omit "to" before people and very
them - the
Your letter should be signed with a person's name.
Hi Jessica,
I don't remember what your original statement was that we corrected to "that demands careful thouht", but as it stands right now, you need to clarify what "that" refers to. Maybe "selling the chocolate factory" would work.
Also, in your first paragraph you have two complete thoughts connected with a comma. That is a mistake. Place a period after uses to correct the error.
Place a comma after therefore.
You have now written a good letter!
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