From: John
Subject: urgent: Monday task list (response)
Bill
The next meeting with the sales reps have been ti will be on the next Wednesday 9. I hope you can be there.
And I`m very happy with Miriam Anderson, because she is a very active, intelligent, efficient and I can see she really wants to work.
Finally, I think at this moment I have only two people deserve a bonus, they are Jessica Mijangos and Selegna Luna, because they worked very well on the last month.
I don`t have more to tell you. But If you have furtherquestions, please contact me in my office.
Have a nice beginning of week.
John
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The next meeting with the sales reps have been on the next Wednesday 9. Change: have been to will be
I wish you can stayed there. Change: I hope you can be there.
And I`m fell - omit "fell"
she has many desires to work Change: she really wants to work
they work very well on the last month. "last month" is past, so you need a past tense verb, "worked".
I don`t have more to tell you. But If you have something, please contact me in my office.
Change: If you have further questions, please....
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